Is this a haiku?
I'm not sure this is an actual haiku. It seems what constitutes one often depends on who you speak to. However, I seem to be in a mood to write this kind of thing so I submit this pretender to haikudom:
An idiot calls.
"Who are you?" Such a question.
Drunk, we're revealed.
(Inspired by some fools running amok outside tonight.)
An idiot calls.
"Who are you?" Such a question.
Drunk, we're revealed.
(Inspired by some fools running amok outside tonight.)
posted by Bill at
4:01 AM
3 Comments:
And by drunk fools are you referring to Kris and Bill?
By
kris, at 11:59 AM
How did you know? Was I that obvious?
By
Lushy, at 12:28 PM
kris & lushy - You know, I had a feeling there was something familiar about those voices ...
mac - yes, and mine was not 5-7-5. But then, they don't always have to be 5-7-5. And if it was REALLY traditional, Japanese haiku (or hokku), well then it's even more wrong. But in poetry, sometimes wrong is right. :-)
By
Bill, at 3:43 AM
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